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Precision Magic

What do you think of my rap?

see if You Can fix some lines and you can even add some if you want beacuase it doesnt really finish off good.

rappin on the streets only 12 years young
hip hop was his air his mind was his lung
took a deep breathe then the magic begun
he did it for fun but every battle he won
battled with his words he didnt need a gun
clips empty out like rhymes from his tounge
his mouth was the trigger with endless ammunition
opposition left in the worst condition
the worst position, were forced into raw submission
wishin that they had better tact and discretion
but he had more aggression more expression
finished them all off in quick succession
now hes got everybody stressin
filled them with indecision
note the precision and the unlimited vision
when he begins everbody starts to listen
askin who will win is the stupidest question
im 17 years old

Hey bro,

Most of these people who are going to
answer this question aren't really going to
know what type of music your talking about.

But honestly, your flow is sick, it's just I'd have
to hear you spit it, I mean you has sick rythm,
the people who say I listen to rap, they're talking
about like Soulja Boy and stuff, lol.. not Hip Hop,
I think your referring to underground hip-hop.

Like Mobb Deep? The Fugees? Living Legends.
"I think the sickest Rythm throughout the bars would be..
clips empty out like rhymes from his tounge
his mouth was the trigger with endless ammunition
opposition left in the worst condition
the worst position, were forced into raw submission"

Honestly, I believe that was good, and great job.
Goodluck with your music, don't go far though, keep
it underground hip hop, that's what I like.

Anyways, don't let these people get you down.

Also, to the guy "ashby"
Don't listen to him, lol he made it worse.
In hip hop you do not spread out your lines.
you had the bars equal in pattern and syllables
So you made it so i could rap it to an instrmental.

good job peace.

Shrinking Hot Rod by Precision Magic - Trick

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