Hogwarts Witchcraft & Wizardry Web

Fantasy, Mythology, Magic: Stories & Spells

Conjuring Powder

Conjuring Powder
Please critique this poem - Midnight Winter. Thanks?

~Midnight Winter~

Midnight winter luminesces as my heart aching-
Sending that lone star to show the date
When envious Death dragged you into its shade;
Yet, it could not cheat you of your vitality,
For you forever live in my whispering dreams.

Powder-white snowflakes fall like days contrived-
Of meadow streams, my endless raindrops conjuring,
Then winters came breathed these warm streams frosted;
And often this pen-hand faltered from the cold, chill air,
But my art retained for love’s loving heart endured.

Half lit moonlight wraps my aged white silks,
To live these memories just half more day;
And now if Death persists to overwhelm me
With its freezing cold fingertips approaching;
I succumb but not by its eminence’s choosing.

In time, gentle Night finally lies to rest,
And dark sleep embraces these rough, pale skins,
To again hear you speak as the days devise;
I rejoice to rekindle our fire anew, love reborn,
In the eternal Elysian fields of the shades.

It has flow and rhythm, the words follow each other in a fluidity that makes it a joy to read. Keep up this caliber of writing.

No items matching your keywords were found.

Sticks, Stones, Roots & Bones: Hoodoo, Mojo & Conjuring with Herbs
Sticks, Stones, Roots & Bones: Hoodoo, Mojo & Conjuring with Herbs
List Price: $17.95
Sale Price: $14.00
You save: $3.95 (22%)
  Eligible for free shipping!
Availability: Usually ships in 24 hours
See Reviews For This Product

Description

2005 Coalition of Visionary Resources (COVR) Winner for Best General Interest Book! Hoodoo is an eclectic blend of African traditions, Native American herbalism, Judeo-Christian ritual, and magical healing...





Tags: , , , , , , , , ,

This entry was posted on Sunday, September 12th, 2010 at 9:49 am and is filed under Metaphysical. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

Leave a Reply

You must be logged in to post a comment.